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I can't do anything about the trees, as I haven't sharpened that version, it is as shot.
Oh well, try again
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Oh well, try again xx
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Nice colours in that Moon. I'd prob have given the houses on the right a bit more breathing space tho, and maybe even shot a little higher up.
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Suzi put it away and take another look in a week or so, I think the first one is fine it is just what you have shot that is a bit open to interpretation, the trees in the back have a lot of light coloured (do you still say coloured ) twigs they make the background sparkle a little, as in an image over sharpened, but it is just there not much you can do about it. The only way would be to burn a little or use a gradient mask but wait to you are happy with what you are looking at before you do any changes as you may well like it as it is.
) twigs they make the background sparkle a little, as in an image over sharpened, but it is just there not much you can do about it. The only way would be to burn a little or use a gradient mask but wait to you are happy with what you are looking at before you do any changes as you may well like it as it is.
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I would have got lower to the ground and had more foreground interest to lead into the image. The houses in the background give some good depth to the image though and overall i like it... it just needs a few tweaks here and there Also... straighten your horizon it is dipping down to the right slightly 
I hate editing on my laptop and very rarely do so unless i have to.
The image looks very orangey too... have you adjusted the colour balance at all?
Also... straighten your horizon it is dipping down to the right slightly I hate editing on my laptop and very rarely do so unless i have to.
The image looks very orangey too... have you adjusted the colour balance at all?
