Thanks skyline. Yeah the arms are an issue due to experimenting with the strip lights I have made but I will get them correct with more use.

Love the pose, like where you are headed with the lighting, the only thing I don't like is the hair I have tried a few shots like this myself I'll try and get them up (model has some issues) so I won't post without her consent! But what I found, through trial and error, was too much hair product causes the uneven hair distribution! It makes it look like you have spiked here hair rather than blown it.