teignmouth in devon. near where i live

thanks guys

Nice sign

Nice colours Jols - I like the way you have framed the shot

Great pic love the colours.

could it be better.

Personally for me, im unsure what the subject focus is? Its a nice shot and well exposed but my eyes arent drawn to anything in particular.

If its a ring shot, the emphasis needs to be on the rings and the detail there in. Maybe shoot from above next ime with the flowers blurred underneath to provide a nice backdrop.

If its the flowers, maybe lay them on a mid height object or even the ground, Use a shallow DoF feild to keep the bouquet in focus but have the bride and groom in the distant background

She's mostly in the shadow, and I don't know if it's reflective of real life, but his fingers look really chubby/fat(/wrong?) also her rings look too small for her making her finger look a bit fat/wrong too.

So I would zoom out to get their head and shoulders in the shot too or try another more 'flattering' angle.

here is another of my attempt i know the lighting is duff but hows my dof.

i need the fimble to be sharper help!!!

whats your exif data hun?