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"Bianco" commercial
Another shot from the Amfi shoot.
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AB1600 in large octabox boomed a little to the right
AB1600 in gigantic softbox back left
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Far prefer this to the others, but I do think that the shoes in front of her floor foot are confusing and distracting - should not have covered the foot up with them, if you understand what I'm getting at - and again, blurry furniture in the foreground distracts, I would clone out that bench.
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Nice work Tommy!
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I agree with Zoundz.
Best of he ones we have seen so far.
The blurry bench, bottom left edge needs removing.
Its a shame about that black shoe in front of her foot. It took me a moment to work out what was going on with her leg.
Good work though.
Best of he ones we have seen so far.
The blurry bench, bottom left edge needs removing.
Its a shame about that black shoe in front of her foot. It took me a moment to work out what was going on with her leg.
Good work though.
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Love it except for the already mentioned shoe as at first it looks as though she's got a deformed leg.
Have to say this one is my favourite so far.
Have to say this one is my favourite so far.
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Agree about the black shoe...looks a bit odd.
I still think you're editing is still a little harsh, in terms of the lighting and contrast, but I think this is probably the best of this series that you've shown us.
MD
I still think you're editing is still a little harsh, in terms of the lighting and contrast, but I think this is probably the best of this series that you've shown us.
MD
