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I like the first one the best Suzi 
Now, I know this is being picky (lol, you knew this was comming) but...
... The first pic, you have something just peeking in to the shot on the right hand side, three quarters of the way up. Might be worth cloning or cropping out
Alan.
Now, I know this is being picky (lol, you knew this was comming) but...
... The first pic, you have something just peeking in to the shot on the right hand side, three quarters of the way up. Might be worth cloning or cropping out
Alan.
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LOL I knew someone was going to mention it, I didn't pay any attention to it , till I posted it
Just for Alan
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Ahhhh yes,
Much better, I can sleep easy tonight now
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Much better, I can sleep easy tonight now
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Ok can I please add my thoughts. I would apply the rule of thirds and crop back to where the two join together. Alternatively the left side has nothing of interest so personally I would either reduce that as well
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Very nice! Especially the first shot
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Great shots (and edit!) 
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It is interesting how people see the work of others, we do see things differently and one persons idea of the perfect composition will not be that of another. I agree with Alan that the little hard bit was best removed but do not find the empty space in one a problem at all. Not keen on 2, think because there is nothing positive about it perhaps if the leaf had been taken from a little higher so it was defiantly a leaf and not a maybe. Now 3 I love the colours but with Baz here don't like the berries dead centre.
Sorry MS don't think you even asked for a CC still got it anyway
Sorry MS don't think you even asked for a CC still got it anyway
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I like the last one. The spread of the stems around the balls (not sure what else to call them) gives it a 3d look. I think on this one it's because they are in the middle of the frame.
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